She's A Pin-Up Girl

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Pin-up girl
January turns December
Hottt legs to remember

Pin-up girl
She's a 36-24-36
Pillow lipped dream

Pin-up girl
Much sweeter than
Double whip cream

Pin-up girl
From Bettie to Dita
A modern day Lolita

Pin-up girl
With cherry red lips
And a devil smile kiss

Pin-up girl
A perfect Vargas smile
With sexy whiplash style

Pin-up girl
She's got Coca-Cola curves
That'll quench your thirst

Pin-up girl
From Marilyn to Molly
A modern day Dolly

Pin-up girl
Black leather and latex
Stiletto high heel kicks

Pin-up girl
Cinched corsets and net stockings
Keep all the naughty boys knocking

Pin-up girl
Feather fans and snake boas
She's always on the go-go

Pin-up girl
From Bettie to Dita
A modern day Lolita

Pin-up girl
An angel or devil
She'll never tell 'ya

Pin-up girl
Whose wink of an eye
Will make a grown man cry

Pin-up girl
Her twirling tassel pasties
Surely drive the men crazy

Pin-up girl
From Marilyn to Molly
A modern day Dolly

Pin-up girl
A hot rock star wife
Lovin' the high life

Pin-up girl
Champagne and caviar
Livin' like a movie star

Pin-up girl
Lotsa diamonds and furs
What a glamourous world

Pin-up girl
From Bettie to Dita
A modern day Lolita

Pin-up girl
From limos to hotels
All the world's her stage

Pin-up girl
From hollywood to France
She'll dance dance dance

Pin-up girl
From vintage to modern
She's the cream of the crop

Pin-up girl
From Marilyn to Molly
A modern day Dolly

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oregon_galoregon_galover 18 years ago
I agree

with the previous statment. shorten it..and make it pop. you have some great lines..love "pillow lipped dream"..good stuff!

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Much improved over the earlier version, "Pin-Up Girl," from 2 months ago. Apologies for not having made a suggestion then but I think you could improve it further by tightening it up a bit (that's the editor wannabe in me trying to get out). I'll send you my idea and you can turn it to toast if you like - after all, it's your spirit you're expressing here.

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