shingles virus haiku set

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the night fever burns
like a molten Nintendo
still churning pictures

broken vessicles
endless like windows in a
sky-scraper forehead

another E.R.:
another poke, prod, snub, sneer,
dark gods in white-coats

anti-biotics,
vitamin C, lidocaine,
slow vivisection

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erectus123erectus123almost 11 years ago
to keep haiku

just add "are" as "broken vesicles are" (one "s" I think in vesicles)---hope you are not battling shingles!

erectus123erectus123almost 11 years ago
nice Sean

just a thought, take the "like" out of this line and it reads better to me

"endless like windows in a"= "endless windows in a"

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