- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Sick Of The Rain
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Falling apart
And all alone
No one here to help
No one to hear my moan
Confused and dazed
And no one to care
Can’t give up, can’t let go
Can’t show the pain couldn’t dare
Life is a mess
My heart is full of tears
World is lonely
My mind is full of fears
Not wanting to be alone
Just wanting to be ok
I want to feel loved
Maybe some other day
I want a life that is simple
I need a life with love
Done everything I know
Even asked the Gods above
My want is simple
My need is plain
I want the rainbow
I am sick of the rain
- COMMENTS
Amyfriendabout 17 years agofor some sunshine in my life...looking for better days ahead. Well done.
Amyfriendabout 17 years agofor some sunshine in my life...looking for better days ahead. Well done.
LeBrozabout 17 years agoWelcome to Lit with this really fine first piece looking for that bit of brightness to fill a drab life. But as for me, I'm sick of the snow.
<P> Generally a good write but there is a spot where I'd like to suggest one very small little tweak to smooth the flow:
<P>"My heart is full of tears
<P>World is lonely
<P>My mind is full of fears"
<P>Try:
<P>"My heart full of tears
<P>World is lonely
<P>My mind full of fears"
