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Click hereI watch her standing on the deck
looking towards the east
her nakedness delights me
a lovely morning feast,
it's an odd situation
how an outline can provoke
such sensual aspirations
in most common folk,
and she knows her powers
a jester or a wink
can move a mountain range
she knows what I seek,
I ask her what she's doing
she asks what do I need
turns around and smiles at me
the precursor to the deed,
the morning / evening / mid-day dance
that we both enjoy
upstairs / downstairs / in my truck
both overt and coy,
the act does not define us
but provides a common thread
to tie our lives together
both in and out of bed ...
I liked that line myself. I liked this and the way it flowed and where it went. Nice, 5d
This is good, cavu, except the rhyme in the last line of the first stanza felt forced to me. The language was nice and fluid elsewhere.