silhouettes of sun

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bluerains
bluerains
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love is a shrine
shadow cast
from formless fever
a duel death
fracturing orgasmic pinions
fortified by lightning
magnified

bluerains
bluerains
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5 Comments
Bill DadaBill Dadaabout 16 years ago
^

Describing the action is easy, describing the feeling next to impossible. You make it look easy.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 16 years ago
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That exhultant moment captured so well — at least till he rolls over and falls asleep...

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailalmost 17 years ago
bright

witty word wizard (~_~) reminds me of... the sound of sunshine... nice write blue.

wildsweetonewildsweetonealmost 17 years ago
Poetry Forum

i mentioned this poem in the New Poem Review thread in the Poetry Forum - wildsweetone

WickedEveWickedEvealmost 17 years ago
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What? Your poem is skimming over the top of my brain and not really sinking in. I pretty much get it, but it's not one of those sink-in-and-stay-with-you kind of poems. Maybe it's just me being a lame reader. ;) Anyway... it sounds pretty.