- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Simply Put.
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Written by jes_da_man:
Sunday, December 16, 2001 - 1:27:00 PM.
Please be nice enough to vote or comment on this (or any other, or all) of my stories or poems. It would be truly appreciated.
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I want to be your life time companion,
And walk with you through life hand in hand.
Sharing such happiness both day and night,
Until the hour glass of life has no more sand.
I want to be your trusted confidant,
To help you fulfill your deepest desires,
And share all of your painful heartaches,
Until they finally vanish like dying fires.
Your dreams, I want to keep as if my own,
And always be there at your beckon call.
I want to smile each time you smile,
And giggle with you at nothing at all.
I want to be the lover who shares the passions,
That because of distance we are forced to ignore.
I want to be the softness that induces you to trust,
And the naughtiness which makes you beg for more.
I want to share your breakfast and your dinner,
And with a tender smile offer you a snack.
While you sit and sip your glass of diet Pepsi,
I'll sip my coffee, which of course I take black.
I want you in the shower and also on the bed,
Held by your tender arms that melt me like fire,
And feel the hips that power your every thrust,
While your lips of pleasure fuel my desire.
My love, the way I feel for you is no secret.
My passion and desire for you grows day by day,
And without hesitation, I put it very simply,
I want and need to be with you in every way.
- COMMENTS
jes_da_manabout 13 years agoAuthorThank you vrosej10, for your commentary and your encouragement. It is truly appreciated.
However, in my defense, all I can say is that... if you noticed the date... this poem was written approximately 10 years ago. To this date, I am still in the learning process. Hopefully it’s getting better. :-)
Sincerely,
Jes_da_man
vrosej10about 13 years agoStanzas four and five are good. They are concrete. The rest would be better if you went this way. You've just proven you can, go with it.
