Sin du jour

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burning ears are shocked to hear
what I will do for you.
you tell my secrets
like confessions to a priest,
in whispered tones.
in darkend corners
of dusty rooms.

tell them all of how
I set my sin's on a silver platter
before you for your choosing.
of my torrid tones
and wicked pace.

tell the tale
knowing there is no exaggeration.
while smoky exaltation creeps
across your face.


I am no daughter of Eve,
and not the apple.


tell them all that
I am the snake.

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unpredictablebijouunpredictablebijouover 15 years ago
nicely done!

That's a great piece. Tight, efficient, sexy and vivid. There's a nice sense of wham in the last four lines that hits hard without feeling like a punchline. Excellent work.

UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellalmost 16 years ago
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Very sexy we all have a darker side. Do you need the apostrophe in sins?

Bridget69Bridget69almost 19 years ago
Sinfully...

delicious!

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Talealmost 19 years ago
a Temptress

I think that's what the snake did was lure deviate motives and stir the dark side of the soul <hehehey!> cute title

Wanton VixxxenWanton Vixxxenalmost 19 years ago
Mmmm!!!

This was a decadently dark, sex sinful piece, Sabina! And as a decadently dark {not dark as in, "demon" - just dark as in, "brunette"} sex sinful Domme, I might have to use something like this as a clause in a slavery contract for potential submissives <wink> Wicked warnings of a SINister feel throughout. Great work!

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