Singapore Knights

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Desejo
Desejo
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Mango sliced on hotel china
perfumes heavy Malay air
condensation beads on a silver knife
fall in perfect drops

Muffled door slam and stumbling laughter
nudge memories when
smoking and drinking
had no guilt
hangovers lasted only 24 hours
and the only person calling anyone daddy
was paid to do so

Easy enough to slip downstairs
where single malt
single girl
elixirs
coax graying egos
into testosterone gods
expert in bacchanalian
Insider trading

Maybe tomorrow.
Today, there is the fruit plate.

Desejo
Desejo
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erectus123erectus123almost 11 years ago
well

done! the world is evidently the same

TzaraTzaraalmost 12 years ago
I quite liked this.

Evocative of a different place (different for me, anyway), and I loved the lines:

the only person calling anyone daddy

was paid to do so

SweetOblivionSweetOblivionalmost 12 years ago
Nice Imagery

A pretty concoction

NeonuroticNeonuroticalmost 12 years ago
Nicely done.

This is my favorite kind of poetry with descriptions of a place and observations with a tone to convey the mood. You wrote this so well that I felt like I was there.

live4passionlive4passionalmost 12 years ago
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god you have a way with words ;)

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