- Erotic Poetry
- Six Inches
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Click hereNo matter where your thoughts may lie
You have six inches for which I sigh.
What are these six inches you wish to know?
They could be from your heel to toe,
Or they could be the tender span
That I would call your loving hand.
All of those inches I love a lot
But now I'll really name the spot,
Whether you want to hear or not.
The spot I sigh for makes me hot.
I sigh for your warm, hard cock!
I want those six inches around the clock.
- COMMENTS
vrosej10about 13 years agoIn english it is hard to take end rhyme seriously. This is a serious poem. Try moving the rhyming elements to the middle of the line. They are not as noticable but still of the sonic patterning.
tigerjenabout 13 years agoOkay reading but felt that it could be better...its straightforward but needs a bit of sexy sizzle :) I look forward to reading more from you.
twelveooneabout 13 years agosounds like a commercial, late night. try not couplets, also feels like straight iamb. so it sounds like a jingle.
