Slut

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halfdwarf
halfdwarf
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Slick is your tongue
As it slides down my cock,
You're hot as the sun,
And I'm hard as a rock,
I push you back gently,
My hands, moist with sweat,
Press into your pussy,
So vividly wet,

I mean no dishonor,
You beg for disgrace,
You beg to be fucked,
To be put in your place,
You're moaning "Defile me!"
As in you I bore,
I'll undulge you,
My slut, my whore,

But I know you'll betray me,
You'll paint me a cheat,
And maybe you're right,
But you begged for my meat,
My cock, and my body,
To make you feel right,
My slut, and my roommate,
Goodnight

halfdwarf
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darkerdreamerdarkerdreamerabout 17 years ago
Personally...

I hate this poem. Why? You can bluntly say what I try to stylize and always fail at. An excellent piece for sure.

FifthFlowerFifthFlowerabout 17 years ago
nice meter

Nice meter and content. The only line I would change is "My slut, my whore" to "my slut and my whore" for the meter's sake.

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Hot...and very sensual...

and right to the point. I love that straight forward approach. Thanks.

BOSTONFICTIONWRITERBOSTONFICTIONWRITERabout 17 years ago
blunt and bold

I really like this poem. It was fun and refreshingly blunt and bold.