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Smoke

byzell19861986©

The smoke rising
The clattering of a gun
The thud of a child falling
Never to get up again
The falling of running feet
The open gun cabnet
Inciting to two small children
The stupidity of the father
The grief of a mother
The kid mentally scarred for life
Another kid never to laugh again

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