Smoke - haiku

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rachlou

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Tumescent chimneys
Belching black carcinogens
Choking sulphur skies

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KOLKORE about 16 years ago

Yellow skies

Reegardles of the genre I felt that that this brief poem captured through the image of smoking, the connection between the human self intoxicating behavior and the macro behavior. The environment, like humans chokes on its smoking.

WickedEve about 16 years ago

A lot of poems that are labeled haiku don't really read like haiku. This is a nice, brief poem.

twelveoone about 16 years ago

entire thing is a cliche, all cliche no aha, no aha no haiku

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