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Click hereClear cold flakes that fall
like tears from a frozen soul
or the shades of dreams.
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McKennaover 18 years agoEvocative Images
Very evocative images here. I like the simile between snow flakes and tears from a frozen soul, or shades of dreams. I get the mental image of something or someone freezing out another; it speaks of a powerful depth of emotion rather than a lack thereof.
LeBrozover 18 years ago~~
Welcome to Lit
With this haiku;
Like that line,
"like tears from a frozen soul"
