- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Snowscape
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a perfect ridge of snow.
The pine's needles dangle,
festooned in hoar,
its fallen cones dreaming
of lives to come.
- COMMENTS
ishtatover 10 years agoGood and I 5'd it. Only jarring note is the word festooned. Don't think it really describes what hoar does. But a good'un.
buttersover 10 years agoquiet, pristine, the concept of the dreaming cones... love it. if i had to change anything, it'd only be to drop 'it's and go with 'fallen cones dreaming'. really lovely, complete image.
Ashesh9over 10 years agoRebirth / re-incarnation perhaps in another shape or as another being ?!
