- Non-Erotic Poetry
- So long
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So long since last his hands
swept away my fallen strands
kisses soft upon my cheek
tasted all my tears so sweet
whispered in my apricot ear
"have no fear
my dear
I am here
is that not clear?"
So long since last my lips
laughed upon his skin
hands possessing
caressing
confessing
undressing
my deep desires to him
So long since last his eyes
shocked my silent soul
spark of irresistibility
inexplicably
impurity
maturity
bore into me a hole
So long since last my heart
fell beneath his spell
dragged into the wrestling ring
arresting
jesting
protesting
emotional heaven and hell
- COMMENTS
MzFlyover 10 years agoI like the flow and feeling in this one. Thanks for sharing your work!
Oldbear63over 10 years agoIt reads like a song to me - maybe a quiet, private song, half hummed, half whispered to oneself and repeated. Very nice
LesseloovesPeterover 10 years agoAuthorTod, I'm not sold on the quartet rhymes... They feel a little forced to me. I played with it some but in the end stayed with it because I liked the meaning over the flow... Not always the choice I make. I definitely feel this piece could be tightened.
Ashesh9over 10 years agoArrested
Jested
Protested !!
5-ed
