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Click hereFrom first moment her wildflower beauty fetched his
gypsy moth heart fluttering in transitory
cocoon shift,
she became the idea of his transformation
so his wings might draw sustenace from her singularity,
integrating instincts. by bluedolphin®
such luv for tha blu...
Your words always roll off my tongue
like buttercups in springtime..
you have exceptional talent, and views-
that show beautifully in your work..
sGp
Really a beautiful piece of writing. I think different line breaks would show it off better: some of the images seem lost in those long lines, but just my opinion. Either way, I really like it. Your poem has been recommended in the New Poems Reviews thread on Literotica's Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum. Thanks for the read! :-)