Solitude and Lonliness

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Solitude and Loneliness

Blind in a world of aesthetic vision
Deaf in world of beautiful sounds
Paralyzed in a world of wondrous movements
Immobile and frozen I stand

Trapped in a world of my own design
Wrapped in emotions I can't define
Alone in a sea of humanity
Faith only in my fraility

Strength without purpose
Wisdom without power
Love without praise

In the midst of the ocean I thirst
In the midst of the desert I freeze
In the answers I question

The more I fill
The emptier I become

More than all can want
It is everywhere but none can find
Always so close yet unable to grasp

Trapped in the sea of solitude and loneliness

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panama trickpanama trickalmost 17 years ago
Very moving

I could feel the pain of this .. very well written.

theMasterBaitertheMasterBaiterover 18 years ago
Sad but Sweet

Very good...

...the part about "this without that" was touching.

Frankly, and I guess this is stereotyping on my part, but the thruth is that I'm impressed that anything this deep came out of a cute little blond. Thanks for busting me out of that...

ButtaflyButtaflyalmost 20 years ago
nice

lilsweetangel... it was very expressive, and bittersweet.

I liked your poem.. 'hope to read a happier one soon. buttafly

sandspikesandspikeabout 20 years ago
I like it

Could of been a little smoother, but I caught the

the confusion.