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I broke 169 eggs
 and before I could
break the last
my tears spilled
over your future
you left me alone
and like steam I hovered in the air
over the puddle of tears waiting
still, I pray that I can forget
that I wont see what you did
when you plead with me
when the orphans swirl down around my feet bubbling over the drain
cause you left me alone
and still I waited
we smile so we dont faint
 from exhaustion and dispair
because all I see is need
and all I feel is need
and the need whips me like a bad dog
cowering on the floor
 licking the palm of your hand
and will I always be alone
just waiting for the blue sky to fall
 and the clouds to rush to my rescue
 i wouldve lain in your lap forever
 and only now you see
when you leave me alone
and I am content broken
lapping at my puddle of tears
no more happy birthday cakes
no more family affairs
no more nuzzles in the night
just loneliness and fear

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tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
BAKING HELPS SORROW

icing the cake brings tomorrow. TK U MLJ LV NV

Maria2394Maria2394about 12 years ago
I still don't like

the mistakes, but the story here is worth the time to read it. Criket, please tighten up your work because you gave a talent that only needs to be nurtured. seriously, make it right and it will be good!