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Click hereThe time in the forest fuelled the flames
Wind softly caressing our skin as I sucked your cock
Ripples of excitement when you bent me over the log
Breasts being squeezed and my pussy being filled
Moans that we could hardly keep from being heard
Biting our lips as we both came together
Grinning as we went on the trail walking past hikers.
The time in the car sent me over the edge
Spreading my legs and lifting my skirt for you to see
Sliding fingers back and forth over my pussy lips
Watching you stroke your cock as we drove
Pleasure as I undid my top and pinched my nipples
Gasps as you wiped your juices on my clit
Urgency as we ran into the house to fuck so hard
The time on the patio set me free
Sitting on the bench rubbing your cock in the dark
Straddling your lap and sliding you into my wet pussy
Moving up and down on you as you held my breasts
Kneeling in front of you to suck your cock
You cumming in my mouth and over my breasts
Laughing as we looked to see if anyone saw
I agree with the previous comments - you started out on a journey but didn't arrive. HOWEVER, I enjoyed what I read - maybe add a last stanza?
You set the scene and developed tension with this piece, but you didn't reach a conclusion. This is showing me a porn movie, two people having sex. Personally, I like my hard core fucking to be wrapped in a bit of romance.
Good word choices, nice and dirty without being unbelievable. Thank you for your poem.
Carrie