- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Someone
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I need someone
Who'll hold me close when I'm scared
Comfort me when I cry
Support my every dream
I want someone
Who'll love me for who I am
Unconditionally
Want me eternally
I crave someone
Who'll spark a fire in my heart
Make me believe in love
Drown me in passion
Right now I sit
Staring out my window
Looking at the night sky
Making just one wish
For love
For happiness
For someone
- COMMENTS
LeBrozabout 17 years agoSoft romantic wistful poem, but I'm with Kolkore on that unconditional love business. The whole idea of unconditional love should be banned from all rational and romantic discussions. To love unconditionally means to love a saint and a pedophile with the same degree of love. How would you truly feel about a man that loved you without discriminating between any of your actions?
KOLKOREabout 17 years agoAllow me an extra poetic comment if you will.
I am with you in as much as your wishes convey all that is common to all of us. And I wish you all but one of your wishes: Loving you unconditionally. It sounds nice, but you dont want any one who would love you unconditionally. You will not want your lover to love you unconditionally. Probably he will love you for all the good that you have. And you will love him very conditionally; conditioned on cotinued love and respect and mutual work together... Sorry, I did not mean to blow away the romantic mist, actually, just make sure that it stays.
Amyfriendabout 17 years agoI hope she finds that special someone.. and I'm sure they will be happy ever after.. Thanks.
