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- Something I Was thinking Of
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When I look into your eyes.
A love,that never sleeps.
A love that never hides.
I hear your heart beating steady.
When I'm lieing in your arms.
A loving heart beating continuously.
A beating heart that continues to charm.
Like music,it sooths the savage beast.
Ending nightmares on the darkest night.
Bringing about eternal peace.
Replacing the darkness with it's infinite light.
I feel heat of your body.
Melting the chills cursing through mine.
Warmth produced by the love in thee.
Soothing the pains of time.
The touch of your love is like electricity.
Thunderbolts from the heavens above.
To another they are deadly.
But to me they are cupid's arrows of love.
I can taste the love seething from your pores.
Dripping,like an april shower.
Enflaming my sences,unlocking all doors.
Your love has just that much power.
Never knew a love could taste so sweet.
But then I never had one that I could taste.
Then you came along,making my senses complete.
Where once they were going to waste.
I hear the love,when you speak to me.
For it echos throughout my mind.
Causing my thoughts to roam wild and free.
And only your love can put them back in line.
I hear your love's enchanting voice.
Endlessly calling my name.
And realizing that I have no choice.
I follow the love that's driving me insane.
Errol"Wiff"Winfree
09-22-04
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Amyfriendabout 17 years agoIt shows..
great promise, but the underlining kills it for me. I would put a space where the underlines go (apart from the first line) and break it into stanza's of 4 lines of verse.. Then it would be pretty good.
