- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Sometimes it's enough
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Sometimes it’s enough
just to say thank you
fly guy,
and thank you too
sack.
I can love you both
for your critical eye.
And as you can clearly see,
I considered your advice
and decided to separate
my verse into sentences.
So, what do you think?
Keep on writing.
The world needs more male poems.
- COMMENTS
WickedEveabout 19 years agoAs long as they keep their entire meter tucked in their pants. And as long as they don't couplet or strophe off in public.
Anonymousabout 19 years agomaking this suggestion, but I scatter suggestions like bread crumbs; some tasty, some stale, some down right moldy! I retract it, if I did, and accept your thanks.
Fly
sackabout 19 years agoI don't remember suggesting you use sentences, but anything is possible. I agree about male poets, though. (not male poems, a happy accident.....how do you tell the sex of a poem?....LOL)
