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Sonnet I
Caressing your face, nibbling and biting
Ripping of buttons and rasping of zips
Touching and tasting, wet reddening lips
Striking desire through golden bright lightning
Feeling your touch on my body, fighting
My graceful Adam devoid of his leaf
Now you're all fingers, lips, tongue and white teeth
Devouring vision of fire delighting
Wild wet desire, gasping slippery slick
Clutching and grabbing with deepening breath
Grasping and groping, growling and rough lick
Drawing deep in dark, approaching my death
Consumed by greed, my body convulsing
With beat after beat of pleasure pulsing
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