Sparrows flit

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Equinoxe
Equinoxe
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Sparrows flit
Amidst the last green
Summer leaves,
Inviting autumn's feeling
Into my heart and mind.

Equinoxe
Equinoxe
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LeBrozLeBrozover 15 years ago
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This poem has been selected for listing in Wednesday's New Poems Review.<br>

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WickedEveWickedEveover 15 years ago
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Pretty poem. I thought it was a tanka, not sure, then I remembered your tanka thread. ;) So, it's a very pretty tanka! It's not saying much to me, but it really is lovely and sometimes lovely is enough.

Safe_BetSafe_Betover 15 years ago
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Beautiful. Your usual level of superb excellence. :)