- Erotic Poetry
- speak, of heart
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ten thousand waves
of thought, end
telegraphed, in braille,
our secrets
do we share, a language?
djungle
speak, of heart
- COMMENTS
live4passionover 11 years agoAuthorNo, not wasted greenmountaineer. Delightfully perceptive, and Very much so appreciated.
greenmountaineerover 11 years agoi like the word play here
with punctuation where one wouldnt expect it
i think the line breaks
well chosen
served as punctuation too
am i being too presumptive here
suggesting the d before your jungle
the phonetic equivalent of
the fun you may have had
with punctuation
or should I say
absence thereof
in as much as j
at the beginning of a sentence
in English has a d sound to it
i may be wrong
but i hope not
because i otherwise wasted a 5
