Spree 7

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Part 8 of the 10 part series

Updated 10/07/2022
Created 12/18/2003
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Icingsugar
Icingsugar
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to float my boat
don't hesitate
to help yourself
to hyperventilate
your hyper venom hate
and blow that lid
to blow that burning soot
out of your lungs
so I can linger
to lick you up
without that sour
aftertaste

right here
where and when
demanded

to rock my world
don't hesitate
to slap my face
with a palpable palm
and wrap your calm
in form of arms
around this man shape
cactus thorny
carelessly horny
overloaded oddity

dazzled down
I'm easily
commanded

 

Icingsugar
Icingsugar
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jthserrajthserraabout 20 years ago
Love the...

wordplay here... well done.

jim :)

AngelineAngelineabout 20 years ago
Well now...

that's a violently sexy little poem you wrote there pal. These sprees of yours together make a book--a good one. You do know that, right?

Ok one nitpick. Might be my ear, but this sounded rhythmically off enough to make me stop reading and say "huh?"--

and wrap your calm

in form of arms

around this man shape

cactus thorny

carelessly horny

overloaded oddity

I'd do this (just a suggestion....)

and wrap your calm

inform of arms

around this man shaped

cactus thorny

careless horny

overloaded oddity

(Note that I did a "Rybka" to "inform" hehe.) Anyway, you know I love these word sprees you skid onto your computer. :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
damn

I need a cigarette

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