- Non-Erotic Poetry
- State of fever
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Click hereHow wonderful is to be...
This state of fever
Embraces my forehead
I have thought about it
And I'll undo the seas
On your aniseed pelvis
How wonderful is to be...
This state of fever
Brushes the skin snow white
Taste the watermelon lips
The low clime of your hips
The ardent tropical bight
How wonderful is to be...
This state of fever
Erodes the delta beguiled
And the beach is corroded
Paradise comes and fissures
Without anybody who moves
Who would repair it?
- COMMENTS
WilliamButlerYeatsabout 13 years ago'aniseed' we're going for scent of anise? If so, the image doesn't work for me.
buttersabout 13 years agoof imagery! each connects and supports the next rather than pulling in opposition.
'aniseed pelvis' is definitely original phrasing, and i love the sounds in 'the delta beguiled'... so rounded, curving, meandering, spreading... all that conjured by 3 words and their sounds.
