Steel Veins

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bluerains
bluerains
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Trapped into cages of
mindless series of misfortunate events,
chasing validation,
accepting pseudo sycophancy
from peeled threads of a mannequin
while a greystoned hard on
is consumed
by Morriganian minions.

bluerains
bluerains
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My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 18 years ago
steel veins

this looks familiar <grin> great write blue~ images that flash at you almost made me duck <quack> <smile>

sweet GA peachessweet GA peachesover 18 years ago
TOO LONG GONE...

from the depths of

your blue..

that runs ever so true

on this side,

and mystic with creation..

*****YOU SCORED from the peach!

luv2theblu-

sGp

sacksackover 18 years ago
where's Webster when I need him....

neat selection of words, I'm in awe of your ability!

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Ohhhh, my head!

Making me think!

Speaking, you have been, to cymry

and spinning words of celtic thread.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
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I loved how this work ran in a deep spiral continuing the vivid imagery that shocks the mental levels into understanding the MORE of this world... very mystic there blue..(Du hands over crown lol..) nice job

du~

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