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Click hererough hemp in hands
stern voice: “Don’t move”
and she is so still
not a ripple glimmers
as he casts his net
not a muscle moves
as he weaves his silken web
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Vampiric_Mirageover 19 years agoExcellent!
This is a very well-written, short & sensual poem. My only suggestion is possibly removing the word "and" from the beginning of the third sentence. Otherwise, this is an excellent poem!
DanaQtover 19 years agoGood write.
not a muscle moves
as he weaves his silken web- loved it!
Made me want more :-)
