still life

byseannelson©

Floating down
the endless stream
'of cigarettes and magazines'

over sun-lit rocks
and night-lit dreams,
the chaos clash
of T.V. memes

something like an I.V. drip
of Kafkaesque news themes
and animated trips
of acidic insinuation,

filling a few rooms
of opiated asylum
from the soul-numb roaring
outside world
of clumsy, pervasive machines

with
all their garish cacophony
of gold-fever and neo-Germanic ambition:
this modern half-life
of constant undeclared war,

at the heart of it all
a vacuum...
which nature's said
to abhor

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by Trixareforkids02/14/15

I like

The flow and the sounds of this piece. It felt to me like a commentary on both the modern age and a relationship.

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