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Click hereStill searching
for that
way to be
that
way to she
that
way to we
that
isn't known
by
her or me
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perksalmost 20 years agoposted on new poems 6-26-04
I love this. However, you and I both know, it could be a start to a bigger greater poem. You played it safe by keeping it short. Not that short poems can't be big and great, but this style, that fast quick assonance/rhyme thing, yeah, you need like twelve of those verses, to see how fluid your skillz are. Come on, come play, sugah.
