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Click hereI am waiting
for the change
I know you
all your tricks
all your ways
the lies begin again
while I lay cold
and unnoticed
not stupid
I warned you
I see more than
you think
I am here
I am always waiting
for a beginning
for an end
always waiting
for something
when can I stop
the waiting
when will you
stop making me wait
oh yes
when I stop
letting you
I forgot
very well put.
You may want to try some comma's and periods to make the reader pause where you want.
create a bit more tendion.
Your work certainly contains tension...play with it...