- Erotic Poetry
- Stolen Breaths
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Click hereShadows came with stolen breaths
Their secret words upon my lips
They silently suffocate my chest
And fill me with their fingertips
Their lies become a cloud so soft
I lay with satin on my eyes
I awake to find me lost
My body stripped and so despised
No tear will ever streak my face
While the hunger for warm juices start
Yet this charade is in my place
To mask my broken whithered heart
I plead to them so cold and bare
Warmth from their hands upon my breast
"You've fucked me dry" I am aware
The shadows will never cease to rest
- COMMENTS
twelveooneover 13 years agoin that case you may want to consider an increase in the alliteration at the end
CharlieMoover 13 years agoAuthorThe rhyme is to make it feel like it has rhythm... like a breath or a heartbeat... some thing synchronized while the topic is chaotic and wild... a paradox.
twelveooneover 13 years agointeresting, I'm curious as to why you started to break out in rhyme? Not a crit., a question.
