Stone Dream

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Kaishaku
Kaishaku
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Stone Dream

A limestone turns
yearning water it bathes
in darkness and light
bright, smooth curves
and twisting shadows
to flow in imagined seas
soft white and submarine
saline wave-worn it peers
surfacing its periscope eye
skyward to a morning blue
only to awaken to lonely black
back on arid ground.

Kaishaku
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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Interesting

Interesting poem. Creates interesting images in the mind when read out

twelveoonetwelveooneover 18 years ago
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Ah, a Kaishaku poem that is not about food - I think. Do I need to know, perhaps, I better not, reminds me a little too much

like my life.

duckiesmutduckiesmutover 18 years ago
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This reads aloud very well, but on the page, it seems to lack punctuation? The last four lines are superb.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Khufu's pyramid

perhaps...ahh...limestone...as "theblue" said to me...hot coffee in a can...winks...blue

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