- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Stop Making Sense
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Inside,
Where blood pulses,
Muscles twitch,
And hearts beat,
You live.
Driven by
Genes,
Neurones,
Instinct,
Intellect.
Changed by
Environment,
Experience,
Love,
Violence.
Lucid thoughts don't always make sense.
And that's okay.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 18 years agoI'm glad that it is OK to sometimes not make sense. All of your work that I have read tonight has touched me on a personal level, thank you.
lostandfounderover 19 years agoJust because you don't make sense, doesn't mean you're crazy.
I would have given it a hundred, but it felt more like a statement than a poem to me.
Still,it was a poem, and a good one.
