- Non-Erotic Poetry
- straightaway
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Click hereat times i would watch her
hair bob in my lap
like kelp on the roll
of the sea and i would
wonder about how i felt
to her so swollen and hot
in her serious mouth
and that sudden thought
or perhaps the pink sway
of her sharp loosed breasts
would always end everything
straightaway
- COMMENTS
unpredictablebijouover 15 years agoThat is a phenomenally hot piece. If the goal was to arouse, in an intelligent way, you have succeeded. Hot and beautiful.
normal jeanalmost 16 years agomany times I have sat on shore and watched the waves roll in, one after the other. I wished for treasure and was never disappointed, whether that treasure manifested itself as seaweed or shells, shattered by forces of nature...
your poetry is like that, every one unique, every one a story in itself.
I loved his one, and in my opinion, it tops the pile, albeit, a short stack today, it gets the first and sweetest, dollop of syrup, not just the residue that manages to drip down the sides and slip, almost unseen, into the creases.
good work, M. Glew
LeBrozalmost 16 years agoThis poem has been selected for listing in Wednesday's New Poems Review.<br>
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