Stranded

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demure101
demure101
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The jungle's on fire. There's
cracking of boles and
the lianas' whiplash;
splitting wood's gunshots ring out
across the fevered river. I try
to make it to the beach, narrow
no man's land between
the furnace terror and the wide
unchanging water's cheerlessness
to find myself stuck. There
will be no boat - just these two
unpassables, the hot interior's
fevent drive, its youth, ardour,
all the pain of desire in
scars of conflagration and
the vague blue-grey mists, deep
unfathomable longing that fades
into mere colour - pale
pinks - blues - the old ocean's
slow sadness at each new defeat...
In the doubtful distance the last
torn sail wavers and disappears.

demure101
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tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
WILL ANOTHER RESCUE ARRIVE

or is one even en-route, TK U MLJ LV NV

twelveoonetwelveooneover 11 years ago
5ed goddamn

i thought, but no, "vague blue-grey mists" even allowing for, this one pops. you got some nice distance weaving here

fevered river narrow

furnace terror

fevent drive

demure101demure101over 11 years agoAuthor
Typo again...

It should read Fervent, not Fevent. Sorry.