Struggling

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FrostyZen
FrostyZen
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Struggling

Hanging as if by a loose tether,
tossed about by a storm of memories.
Thrown about like someone's garbage,
into the truck I go.
Crushed down deep into myself,
fighting for every breath.
Pushing through the shit,
finally I break through.
Struggle is growth.

FrostyZen
FrostyZen
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FrostyZenFrostyZenalmost 12 years agoAuthor
Thanks

Thank you very much for your comments. They make me want to keep on keeping on :)

CinnerCinneralmost 12 years ago
Wow!

I applaud you for this imagery! It made me think of all the other growth and struggle metaphors: the seed, the violin bow, the butterfly.

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
BUT AFTER THE GROWTH

my commitement is clear and visible TK U MLJ LV NV