tagErotic Poetry(sub)-Spacing Out

(sub)-Spacing Out


I feel heat rising
and flowing through my body
Images circle through my mind
as we connect.
The tension is palpable,
the need is real
I am here only to feel.
A desire floods through me,
and I want to take your pain
to give you only pleasure.
Another touch
some small sound
escapes me
as fluid fire emanates
from you
through me.
I touch your face
feel your heat
when we kiss,
can hear a heartbeat
thundering hoofbeats in my ears
as I cry out
I want
I need.
The world comes slowly into focus
as I am slowly released
from the excruciating pleasure
of connection
and the world around us
fades to

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