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Click heresuck it, he said
a whispered plea
he had done it for me
so I bow my head
down to a dark place
a forbidden garden
i move down, trembling,
feel him harden
i press my lips
to the salty tip
he moans and moves
and raises his hips
like a purple plum
ready to burst
with juices, so ripe,
i slake my thirst
the head swells up
at the touch of my tongue
nectar sticks there
sweet and clear
i kiss away
a perfect tear
a slender thread
ties lip to head
filling my mouth
with firm round fruit
he strains
my lips close round the root
then, breathless, i move
between his legs
tasting his two small
delicate eggs
such a strange intoxicating meat
my hunger increases
the more i eat
quickening now
i sense his need
he senses my hunger
he feeds me his seed
i feel the pulse
in my hand, the rush
a tightening
a searing gush
my tongue is scalded
with burning silk
i drink his hot rich
bitter milk
then pull away
as his spasms die
there, at the slit of the head,
like an eye
i see a swirl
a creamy smear
a perfect pearl
and it was erotic as well,
nice descriptive writing.
Well done.
~ Jenn
You've managed to make it...er....poetic!!