Suck My Rush

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Fresh faced, bright-eyed
Lip-gloss pink
Soft hands dance on my pants
And I feel them sink down deep
But slow
And I feel them trace the place
Before I feel them go down
Touching gentle but wanting to
explore
and I feel my eyes close
and I beg for more in
silence
in my mind
wanting skin on skin
on the head
on the tip
to feel the fingers slide around
and grip
and slide down to pull up and
pull free
releasing me from laying still in
ecstasy
wanting her beneath me but taking it
easy
trying to hold still so she can please me
and the sound of a zipper being unzipped
is a trip to my ears as my heartbeat skips
a beat and I’m holding on
with my breath so sharp that it burns
when it’s taken
in the cool air
pants dropped
and the bulge
of her stare
on my bulge
and her wet lips pursed
ready to burst
as the first kiss resonates
looking up and salivating
hungrily
when she opens up her mouth and starts
tonguing me
frenzied in the first time
she’s ever tasted the way
that I sweat
with my imagination focused on the penetration
ready, get set,
and she goes down
warmth like a woman on her knees
lips wrapped tight so I can feel the squeeze
and her head bobs, sucking up the drool
as she fuels me
tempted with a cruel glare
glancing up from down
on my pool of salt-water splash
that’s building inside of me
riding me hard with her lips
working her hand down feel the sudden rush
as she dips
and her throat’s poked with a long stroke
and she chokes
as I reel back
and black out
and feel her jack me
‘til it smacks against her tongue and shoots deep
hands creeping through her hair
and I can’t hold back
the way her mouth attacks me
with her lips smack
growling
as she follows me
into an eyes-closed-tight type serenity
pulling out to show me as she puts on a show
and I know, the next time and place
that the next blast will last longer
on her face
and I know
red-faced and spaced as she slurps down
and burps
with those eyes filled with sex
that she’s not done
having her fun
because she’s next

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Bridget69Bridget69almost 19 years ago
An exhilerating...

rush of sensual energy.

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Talealmost 19 years ago
Rush hour~

a wild ride on the winged words of poetry, thanks for the journey~

Wanton VixxxenWanton Vixxxenalmost 19 years ago
WHEEEW!!!

Now THAT is what I call a major, full blown {pardon the pun} rush!!! Your meter was impeccable - the timing of the poem - not your meat heat meter <grinnin'> and it just swept Me up and over and around and into the entire oral scene visually. HOT, HOT write! Be back in a bit - I have to go check My own heat meter now. sssssssss...

Vixxx

KaishakuKaishakualmost 19 years ago
Sorry... I didn't mean to leave that anonymously

k.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
You had a wonderfully erotic poem here until...

the pants unzipped. Had you finished the poem there it would have been a very good erotic poem, but as you carried it on it simply lost the flow, the energy of wanting, of desire and became just a description of mechanics. In this poem, like life sometimes, the wanting is better than the having. Think about trimming this poem and I think you will improve it a lot.

k.