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4degrees
4degrees
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you are not my stroke
or my E ticket to poetland
the hard bargain
was driven
right into my
marshmallow armor
not impenetrable,
but sticky quick sand
and suffocating
its a non issue,
you already know
and will never have
a chance to forget
cause baby, i'll remain
in your face
saying your name
assuring and leaving
no lingering notion
that i've been
sucked in far to your
black and bruised world
never wanting to be
anywhere else.

4degrees
4degrees
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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
this says it all for me:

...

no lingering notion

that i've been

sucked in far to your

black and bruised world

...

thank you, it means a lot.

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyalmost 19 years ago
Word Wizzard

right into my

marshmallow armor

not impenetrable,

but sticky quick sand

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I love the form and your wording.

A wonderfull picture of love.

Just loved this one~!!

Jennifer CJennifer Calmost 19 years ago
nice piece

Enjoyed the read,

thanks.

~ Jenn

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