- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Sugar AVE (You Think You Know)
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Click hereDelicate disaster
Forming in your kiss
Backward tumbles
Down open stairways
Where every mistake
Is meticulously plotted
And when you reach for me
I won’t be there
Only the night will embrace you
As I am so far away
Choking on not-lived nostalgia
Swaying in solo
Somewhere between Sugar Avenue
And home.
(May 19th 2006)
- COMMENTS
sandspikealmost 18 years agoand read all your poems. They are all good. This
one said the most to me and I loved the flow.
Less is more,,,but you already know that.
oregon_galalmost 18 years agoi am such a fan of less is more! thank you for your sparing words and getting large on meaning!!!!
oregon_galalmost 18 years agoi am such a fan of less is more! thank you for your sparing words and getting large on meaning!!!!
Maria2394almost 18 years agoif you were to ask me, Iw ould say that I see promise in this poem, its pretty good, not all jammed up with words not needed. well, I liked it ( the premise) and I am kinda surprised no other comments were left. hope to see more from you here
maria
