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Sex

that's what we're here for

sex in the context of black times new roman font on white flickering pc screen

perfunctory and mutual quick and easy
so black on white it makes
not queasy
too cliche too frapee too canapee

she wears a skirt tonight jeans by day
tear it off
faster faster
offer off
panties thongs bikinis strings and gs
acceleration of events
terminal velocity
g force you know
drags you down
or does she
pulling tearing
gnawing
clawing
throw her on the bed
follow through
are those pants off yet
doesn't matter
it'll get wetter
and the g force
g force
times new roman force
roman force
pilum
gladius
phallic objects deleted text
delete
delete
delete
obliterate
in the scream
in the wave
the roar
white noise
white noise of the mind

finish.

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LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 37,000 poems.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
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This is fresh. I like your creativity in expressing something that everyone who lives on the net understands. Enjoyed!

impressiveimpressiveover 19 years ago
I disagree ...

... with the "too rushed" comments. I think it perfectly captures the frenetic nature of ePassion. 'Grats on the E! ~Imp

moonblademmoonblademover 19 years ago
;)

I enjoyed the frenzied, erotic feel of this write, Summer. It brings to mind a passion that burns so hot that you can hardly wait to get your clothes off before you're getting into it right by the front door. As to previous comments about it being rushed, I'd like to quote this part:

"tear it off

faster faster

offer off

panties thongs bikinis strings and gs

acceleration of events

terminal velocity"

I think that was the point of this poem. A lot of times, simplicity is the key. Simplicity can make the most impact. Congrats of attaining the elusive E, Summer, and please don't let a low therm score take that away from you. :)

Honey123Honey123over 19 years ago
Sex in the white box

I think we all have been there. Words written in black and white trying to portray the desire that is felt; the need to get it across through times new roman font...soften by the use of italics

Honey

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