Sunday Morning

** Note to all readers**
I should have said this on my first submission, but I really am looking for any feedback that you all can give. I've just started putting my work out there for others to read and I'm really curious to know how people are feeling about how and what I write. So thanks for any advice you can give and here's the poem... E

I love to serve
You.
Cock between lips
So wet and inviting.
On my knees, head
In your hands.

Suck, lick, taste
It's MMMM
Just what I've
Waited for.

That sigh, moan,
Groan of
Pleasure tension
Streaming through
The air.

With one last tease
Of lips on tip
All your manly
Strength goes weak
And power switches
From your hands
To my mouth.

And now I'm in
Control.
You want my
Pussy, try to pull
Me, tug me, get
Me where you crave
Me.

But I hold on,
Hold out for that
One last gasp
Until you can't
Stand it anymore
And you tear
Me away and shove
You deep inside
The most desired
Of all my desireable
Places.

And you hold me,
Bend me, fuck me,
Love me until time
Runs away with
Us and we're
Coming and sweating
And falling into each
Other in a tangle of
Limbs and fluids
And my God.
This is Heaven.