Sunset

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rachlou
rachlou
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Sunset

Scarlet streaks a carmine retreat
Under a darkening sky
Naked ball of white hot heat
Scorching banners of fire
Elemental inferno of desire
Torn asunder in God’s hearth

rachlou
rachlou
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AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Extremely colorful..

well done.

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
Picturesque.

Another Rachlou talent discovered ~ lovely acrostic.

Unbridled_PassionUnbridled_Passionabout 17 years ago
I enjoyed this

maybe I will try one!

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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A rather nicely done little acrostic; but can you do a double acrostic, of at least equal quality?

NirvanadragonesNirvanadragonesabout 17 years ago
Beautiful words

and beautiful image. I adore it.

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