sunset's kiss

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~~~~~~
I lay with you
in sweetest flavor,
butterflies whisper
the taste of flight
as we explore flesh,
scorched within the spread
of unexpected flame.

fear hides your tenderness,
but slippery lips and
slow dancing fingers
unleash secrets
you're longing to reveal.

dead zones brought to life
as you ascertain
where breathlessness
abounds.

your touch,
my drug
that reaches heart,
igniting rapid thunder.

addiction seeks a home
where vacancy's sign
now rests on dreamy wonders.

the taste of silken skin,
fiery lips
craving what you're seeking,
now tremble from fierce
withdrawal.

I close my eyes,
watching us on discovery's
channel,
tasting tomorrow's sunset kiss,
dancing on horizons.
~~~~~~~


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Maria2394Maria2394over 19 years ago
wow, bluesky

I remember when you first came on here, so sweet, so ready to learn, now look what you've gone and done!! this is absolutely beautiful-

I especially liked this part-

your touch,

my drug

that reaches heart,

igniting rapid thunder.

addiction seeks a home

where vacancy's sign

now rests on dreamy wonders.

~~

the alliteration is excellent and your choice of words is really good, this poem flowed and touched me tender, sang it's way into my heart, thank you :)

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