Surrender

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I am a beast ensnared,
Until the day this mortal life fades away
Spellbound, I remain in this labyrinth of love.
So, be gentle in your cruelty
Please cast aside your mask
Shed your cloak of platinum radiance.

I want to see your uncovered face,
The twinkle in your eyes that reveals mischief,
The impish faint smile playing on your lips,
I’ll keep my eyes on you
‘Cause I can’t take my eyes off you
I want to learn the mystery that’s you.

I have a secret to tell you
My passion is only for you
For your touch revives me
Your taste a spell that binds me
I want to hold you,
To surrender to your heart.

Please don’t fill my heart with wounds
I’m like a puppet on a string
Completely in your control
Shameless, I’ll fulfill your want
But amidst this carnival let me discover you
Oh, please show me your face.

I am a beast who’s madly in love
Drowning in the river of lust
Dreaming of you, reaching for your heart
Don’t look away, don’t turn me away
I shall heal you with my trust
To you I surrender my heart.

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fairysongfairysongover 18 years ago
Powerful Poetry Moonie!

Brings to life ones hopes and fears about love, the risks and that leap of faith. The emotional whirlwind before the surrender.

~Tink

Honey123Honey123over 18 years ago
Positively beautiful!

The words, the images that you bring to the mind. I wish I had one ounce of your talent!

~Honey

LeetahLeetahalmost 19 years ago
Wow...

Your writing is wonderful. I am thoroughly impressed, and tip my hat to you.

angelicminxangelicminxalmost 19 years ago
Lovely Elfie

Simply lovely. You captured the power and insecurity of being in love. Kisses! ~Minx

Bridget69Bridget69about 19 years ago
Lovely.

A powerful piece about wanting to reach one's inner revelations and trusting unconditionally.

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