- Erotic Poetry
- Surrender (Give Me Another)
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We seek,
we chase the banner
coiling hungry,
lonely, joyous,
full.
There.
That flutter,
the early throbbing,
the slick of fluid,
and the heat
spreads.
It is waves and tongue-curling,
toe-curling, spine-arching,
consuming release that gives
and goes.
And ends.
Taken,
given,
demanding,
accepted
and craved.
More.
- COMMENTS
Tzaraalmost 15 years agothat I gave this poem a 3 (50%) rating, because that makes it seem (given the inflated ratings system we have here) like I didn't like it.<p>
Actually, I did like it, a bit. It shows care in composition, which is important to me. The problem is that it doesn't <i>say</i> anything. Not really. It mostly piles up a lot of adjectives in an attempt to build an image.<p>
Poems don't work that way. There are no concrete, specific images in this poem. None.<p>
But I can see that you care about language and have talent manipulating it. You are one of the ones who can do it.<p>
God. Sorry, I know I can be a jerk.
