Suspended Animation

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Gossamer wing beat
fervent mandolin strings

sing

translucent iridescence
crystal fragility

glow

opalescent milky rainbow
ribbon slipstream

unfurl

emanate evanescent
angelic ambience

ascend

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twelveoonetwelveooneover 19 years ago
I think

it needs more

flyguy69flyguy69over 19 years ago
Love the contrast

In the title and the poem: suspend v. animate. Well done.

WickedEveWickedEveover 19 years ago
Lovely

Very lovely and mentioned on the new poems thread.

WickedEveWickedEveover 19 years ago
Love the one word

stanzas. Very nice touch. Mentioned on the new poems thread.

minsueminsueover 19 years ago
Ooh, I like it!

I don't know what it's about, but I love the way you've put the words together.

(Thermometer left at default and does not reflect my vote)

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